Sunday, August 2, 2009

How can this sound more CATCHY?

Does this announcement sound good?


I have to present this....its for tutoring on campus.


PSA Announcement





Announcement: Are you falling behind in your classes because you are having a hard time understanding the material?





Need: You have an exam coming up, but you have no clue what to do. You have to take the exam because there are no make-ups, but you cant afford to get a C.





Satisfaction: The best thing you can do is get one-on one help by visiting the Learning Lab.





Visualization: Although, you might have trouble understanding the material immediately, but by visiting the learning lab on a daily basis may prevent you from falling behind in your classes.





Action: Don’t wait until the last minute. Go and get help, from the learning Lab tutors by visiting any campus during the correct hours of operation.

How can this sound more CATCHY?
Sounds pretty good. One tip to make it sound better though. Change this section just a little bit:





Visualization: Although, you may be having trouble understanding the material immediately, a daily visit to the learning lab can prevent you from falling behind in your classes.





Other than that, it's good. Hope this helps.
Reply:sounds great..... but to answer your question, when you are giving this announcement make it sound like u mean it make it a little fun as well..... hope i helped:-)
Reply:sounds good to me =]
Reply:I like it.


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